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      saelbrin
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      Page 115 Resistances

      (Mega paragraph): Remove redundant language and change “For any normal person” to “For an average person”.

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      saelbrin
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      Breaking up the megaparagraph into two or three paragraphs would help, too. The Marcie example can stand on its own, as examples in other sections do.

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